| I’m Fine I thought it was safe here perhaps not not safe anywhere why? hide again mouth shut be quiet talk too much eyes sting bite tongue breathe deep clench fists pace the floor slam doors gently rock sing a song… put on a mask stand up straight head held high smile nod tell the lie “I’m fine” |
Exhaustion
So tired Drained Take my hand Watching Exhaustion Sticky fingers “Snow White” “Meets the living dead” |
wow!!…very deep Poems…written with such description and raw feelings…. <3
One thought – I liked how you physically placed that … visually it was great. (I might try to copy the styling one day if you don’t mind)
Other thought – Where did this come from … am I going to need to tell you to email me????
Yet other thought – They are both wonderful…taken separately … and together. In a sad way.
Thanks Katie:
first thought – I put it in WORD in a 2 column table and then copied it into wordpress…. go ahead and copy away…
second thought – all is good but of course I will email you anyways… “I’m Fine” was written after receiving some criticism I wasn’t ready to get, and “Exhaustion” was written the same day as “the VERY BAD day”…
and yet another thought – they aren’t really meant to go together per se but I wanted to post them both and felt they complimented one another in a way… Thanks for liking them…
*hugs* they are full of deep emotion and a lot of despair. I too, confess a concern.
The effect of both together is very profound. It is time for a good day now I think.
Oh I have had good days since the bad day and these were written on said bad day and prior to said bad day – see notes to Katie… I just thought I would share them, as I polished them up today….
I read your answer to Katie. It made me feel better. *hugs you anyway*
now, to knit the good days together to a good month…
amen to that… and lets continue it to a good year!!!
to a GREAT year
Wishes for a good year for you too … for both of you
And … we have now reached the limit of your nested comments …I know we can set them in our set-up area … i wonder what would happen if we set it to unlimited and there were like a hundred or so…I bet the page would look totally goofed-up!
Uhh…sorry … my mind started to wander lol
xx
“Snow White”
Softly whispered
Pale skin
Dark hair
Bloodstained crimson lips
this …I loved this
Thanks Mum, I had to retrieve this from my “spam” …. You are not spam!!! xox